Chapter 17 didn’t quite get the reception I am used to. I thought, if anything, the biggest complaints I would get would be about the plot not advancing much, since the chapter only covers the space of a day. Instead, some people were unhappy with direction of the relationships. That relatively poor reception is the main reason that I decided to move on to chapter 18 rather then continue writing Lamia 03. Put simply, I want to make it clear that the story is moving forward and not wallowing in relationship drama. I’m close to about the halfway point now.
I explore the interaction of sex and technology, mostly through fiction. Also the name of an 80s synth pop band and video game, no relation.
Monday, November 12, 2018
Friday, November 2, 2018
Lamia: What Does It Mean?
The second part of my story, Lamia, is up on Literotica. A few people have asked what the title has to do with the story. Unfortunately, I can’t reveal that without spoiling things. I never start writing without a pretty good idea how it will end and knowing the major events and plot twists That will occur. I’ll only say that the title relates to the central conflict of the story and an as yet unrevealed antagonist, which I hope to get to in part three or four.
I hope you’ve enjoyed the story so far. I got pretty deep into the philosophy on my first draft of part two, but scaled that back to keep from diluting the focus. I hope to get more into that in the next part, and of course there will be lots more robot sex.
I hope you’ve enjoyed the story so far. I got pretty deep into the philosophy on my first draft of part two, but scaled that back to keep from diluting the focus. I hope to get more into that in the next part, and of course there will be lots more robot sex.
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